Author Topic: Still a work in progress, but here ya go lexi
Cordovaa 
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Subject: Still a work in progress, but here ya go lexi
http://www.gnawbie-art.com/Decepticon.jpg

ill post the final of all of them when im done, tell me what u think

 

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Subject: Still a work in progress, but here ya go lexi
You need to work on the shadows brah, they aren't matching up.

 

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Subject: Still a work in progress, but here ya go lexi
well to be honest its not even lighted yet, the shadows your seeing is default lighting, but its comming, and I'ma post Megatron when im done with him, although thats gonna be a lil bit longer

 

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Subject: Still a work in progress, but here ya go lexi
For some reason I'm having trouble pulling up visuals at work... so I'll respond to this tonight..

 

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Subject: Still a work in progress, but here ya go lexi
Just as Guud said the shadows are not lining up at all and make no sense. There is a shade where shade should not be at the angle which throws the whole thing off.

Instead of doing a basic bent symbol like you did with the Autobot one, I would suggest something more with feeling without warping it to create 3-dimensional drawing.. or perhaps include that but in a different perspective...

My suggestion would be to take the basic logo (naturally sized bigger) and create a blood splatter behind it with it dripping down.... Kinda like

http://iphonefreakz.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/09/Dexter-Logo.jpg

Being that the Deceptacons are chaotic I would do something like that... but focusing your 3D attempts on the blood opposed to the picture itself... would be... unique... and emotional.

Until you fix the shades etc, I cannot properly give you an opinion on it... as it is un finished and thus progress is meaningless in my opinion until you hit the states of proper critiques.

Keep up the good work tho... I wish I could find some drawings my friend did for me using my name.. had a lot of pictures that if you looked hard had my name in them somewhere like in tree branches etc.

 

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Subject: Still a work in progress, but here ya go lexi
just an fyi, this isn't a 3d drawing, its done with maya 2009 3D imaging software, and i understand the lighting/shading is off, i threw this togeather in about 2 hours, but thank you for the comments, and I am currently working on it

 

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Subject: Still a work in progress, but here ya go lexi
Update?

 

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Subject: Still a work in progress, but here ya go lexi
hehe sorry been toying around with painting 3d models in photoshop, but getting the hang of it is... tedious at best, so I just recently laid out the UV's and going to do it the old fashion way, I'm also working on the texture as the old school purple/silver design but added bloody splatter effect human hand print over it, but what you must understand is, this is a side project and my actual school work takes priority over this, adding lighting and a presentation box will be the last step.

Run on sentance ftw!

 

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